Saturday 27 February 2016

Evaluation

The link to my evaluation is below:
http://joshcoe161198.wix.com/mysite

2 comments:

  1. home/about - clear and well presented with good contentADD buttons linking to all your other sites such as vimeo/slideshare/emaze etc
    Q1 - Josh - the link to the word doc works but it is clumsy - the written content is excellent but awkward to find - PLEASE take the time to amend the slideshare and add the test in between each set of images - the current set up is not effective for the higher grades
    Q2 - strong, thorough and well presented (?? could you add a definition of representation/social groups in media terms perhaps as a conclusion) in the last slides where you reference the femme fatale/gun/style linked to TA improve it by using the terms stereotype/archetype/symbolic and a discursive tome - reflect on how the audience reads the social group through these objects in a general cinema /movie context
    Q3 - excellent, well done
    Q4 - TO EXTEND REFLECT ON VIEWING INSTRUMENTS - HOW WILL THEY WATCH it? reflect comparatively on cinema/tv/purchase and streaming and the way your potential TA could be classified and which method you would therefore be using - show your process of research/decide/plan/deliver - this will relate well to your neo-noir considerations
    Q5 - excellent apart from exhibition: you need to also consider how your TA most frequently consumes film - how would you deliver/exhibit it in a way they could enjoy watching it - you have focused on how you market tested it - other than that this a well answered question
    Q6 - sound content but it feels a little short in range - take another look at the list we generated in class and identify any others you can include. Then on the page/outside the Emaze add a refelctive and detailed evaluation - what did you learn/which were the most useful/difficult/challenging/satisfactory to use - where have you made clearest technical progress?
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  2. Well done for meeting the deadline.

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